That's his fault, not hers. You should see her version.
When I write conversations down it's hard to capture the spirit of the give and take. My straight-line write-down-the-meat approach always ends up devaluing the questions and ideas raised by others. My goal is to record what I learned from them, and I often come off sounding self-obsessed. I think it's an occupational hazard: all of us emphasize what we say in our own minds. Writing down conversations just uncomfortably highlights that fact.
When I write conversations down it's hard to capture the spirit of the give and take. My straight-line write-down-the-meat approach always ends up devaluing the questions and ideas raised by others. My goal is to record what I learned from them, and I often come off sounding self-obsessed. I think it's an occupational hazard: all of us emphasize what we say in our own minds. Writing down conversations just uncomfortably highlights that fact.